Wordless Wednesday is a quick post with just a picture from my classroom, a short explanation, and a question for you, my readers.
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This is my side whiteboard in my classroom. I use it for notes and information for my students. This is the outline for my English 11 research paper.
It was developed over several years and trial and error with students struggling to combine research and two text structures: cause-effect and problem-solution.
What helpful writing hints for students have you developed over your time teaching?
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Wordless Wednesday is a quick post with just a picture from my classroom, a short explanation, and a question for you, my readers.
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Argumentative writing has been a staple in my classroom since I started teaching. It has only grown with popularity over the years and now it is commonplace in classrooms from primary school through college level course work.
When I introduce argumentative writing, counter-arguments, and outlining to my freshmen, we always build group outlines in small groups before actually writing our own essays. Here are some examples we have created.
What ways do you build collaboration into writing in your classroom?
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Early Saturday mornings are the only quiet time I get to myself most weeks, and I save all the interesting reads that I find online for that time. This week I am going to share with you a collection of resources that I use for teaching rhetorical analysis.
My classroom has had rhetorical analysis lessons for the last several years for a couple of reasons. Michigan started giving the SAT test as our major high school state assessment, and this test includes a writing section, which is a rhetorical analysis. I also teach online part time for Michigan Virtual, which provides online classes to Michigan students in schools. Last year Michigan Virtual assigned me to the Advanced Placement English Language and Composition, which also has a rhetorical analysis essay. I am sure there is a connection here since both the SAT and the Advanced Placement English Language and Composition test are departments of The College Board. With these changes in my teaching assignment, I very quickly had to come up with lessons to build this into my classroom.
1- I have created this quizlet to help my students practice some literary terms before the quiz. Students have to understand the elements: their definition and application before they can begin to analyze an argumentative piece of writing or a speech. Some of these are fairly easy for students to grasp (anecdote and statistic) while others like tone and allusion are more complex.
2- Many teachers start a rhetoric unit with ethos, pathos, and logos. I, however, prefer to do that after a broader collection of literary terms. My students use this sketch note freebie to begin learning these three rhetorical elements. They can take their own notes and glue the pages in their notebook to serve as a reference going forward. I always limit any piece to only one of the three because otherwise, it becomes too routine.
3- Stacey Lloyd has a great post with ideas on how to teach rhetoric and persuasive writing using speeches and advertisements. She even included a link to a free lesson on teaching some of the terms, and the lesson is a great starting off point. I was especially happy to find her link to recorded speeches to use for analysis. Each of Stacey’s ideas is a great point of entry for students doing this type of analysis for the first time.
4- Building Book Love created a way to visually graph the literary/rhetorical techniques used in a passage. With a shared texts students can pick out examples of different techniques and display them on the board as visual of what is most common. After students pull our the items, they can discuss what might be the best choices to write about in the essay. Her example is from Animal Farm, but she also has done this with Julius Caesar. I am going to try this activity with The Crucible.
5- Rhetorical Analysis with a PAPA Square by The Daring English Teacher. Her PAPA Square (purpose, argument, persona, and audience) analysis brings a more creative way to going over the basics of rhetoric. I would love to do this in small groups giving each group one speech from a collection of famous speeches on different topics. I like that she has her students select one of their own sources from their research writing for completing this project. She also is offering a freebie of her PAPA Square Analysis Project if you sign up by email.
6- The College Board site for the Advanced Placement English Language Exam has exams going back to 1999. Every year has a rhetorical analysis question that is passage-based. You can even get sample analysis responses with scores and commentary. I use the passages for reading practice and annotation. Students can even do some scoring on the sample essays themselves. I also use them for sample analysis with questions for students to see great examples.
7- John Grisham’s A Time to Kill is a great novel. The movie with Matthew McConaughey is also stellar. His closing argument is all kinds of fun to use with rhetorical analysis; plus, who doesn’t love Mr. McConaughey?
8- Pernilla’s English Classroom’s post on writing an argument speech has a great image, which is also available on her posters tab and a link to another video of one of President Obama’s speeches that illustrates ethos, pathos, and logos. Given the current political climate, I am leery of using the current president or former president’s speeches and prefer to go back farther for examples.
9- The Rhetor’s Toolbox’s post on How to Teach Analysis Like a Boss gives a basic process for working through rhetorical analysis. I love chunking the text and looking for patterns and shifts. Plus, I am always a huge fan of writing the introduction and conclusion last. As a bonus, there is a link to another post on writing a thesis statement for the rhetorical analysis essay that I am using regularly.
10- Open Classroom’s Rhetorical Analysis Bookmarks are a stellar reference for students. There is both a foldable, two-sided bookmark and a one-sided bookmark that you can download and print for free. Any reference that students can have on their desks as they read is a bonus.
What is your best resource for teaching rhetorical analysis?
I require daily writing from my students in English classes. It is one of the best ways to have students improve there writing according to Writing Next, a federal research report. I know that this is really good for them, but it can be very time-consuming to grade, review, and give feedback on. Last year I discovered a solution that has significantly reduced the amount of time I spend dealing with journals, writing into the day, whatever you want to call it. Write About has changed the way I handle this daily writing.
For years I had each of my students get a single-subject notebook; one of the twenty-five cent ones from the store. We would then diligently write every day with different length requirements for different grades. They were cumbersome to store, tedious to grade and respond to, and almost impossible to haul home on the weekends. I would find myself either spending an extra two hours at work a week if I collected a different class each week, or a half a day on the weekend if I chose to collect all classes at once. When my previous school went one to one with Chromebooks, I had to find a better solution.
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I discovered Write About last year during the Great Read Aloud when all the participants received free access to the site to use with their classes. It took a bit of trial and error the first couple weeks to get students on the site and able to use it. As we got more adept at using it, the students discovered a few ”tricks” of their own that I had to keep an eye out for. I am now using it with my juniors for the second year in a row and am thrilled with the user experiences and ease of assessing for me.
Setbacks and Pitfalls
One of the things you have to watch for on this is student copy and pasting text into their draft in order for it to look like they have written or written more than they actually have. I had several students copy and paste the entire text of a movie script into their post. It was pretty clear something was going on when their words for the month skyrocketed that one day; I also don’t know if they think I am smart enough to catch such silliness. However, it was pretty easy to see they had a big spike in the number of words written; I wish that I had been able to just remove the post from their total, but that is not an option. Another fun one the students tried is to paste one post over and over. Again, they thought they outsmart me, but it was very obvious when I pulled up their writing page to comment and give feedback (two great features of the site) and I was reading the same writing over and over. Again, I wish that I had been able to remove duplicates, but I couldn’t, so I just didn’t put their grade in until they met with me, logged in, and corrected the problem. It isn’t enough to turn students loose to write and check the graphs at the end of the month. You have to be giving them feedback and comments.
Grading
My students get three or four grades for this part of their overall score each month. My courses are set up with category weights so that 10% of the final grade is the daily writing. Ten percent may seem like a lot, but I put that value on it because the daily practice is so important to their growth as a writer. I give students grades on word count, published posts, and drafts. If we are using commenting in the course, there is also a score for comments. Remember that I am spot checking students writing through feedback and comments. I tell students that they need 300 words a day; this is about 2 full paragraphs, and Write About will tell you the average words per post for each month, so that is what I score that out of and it is the largest portion of the grade. I then gave them credit for writing every day through published posts and drafts. Each of these I make worth 10 points. Finally, if I am requiring commenting, I will make those each worth 10 points. All of these items are presented to the teacher on the Student Statistics page. I simply scroll through the students on the first of every month and put the totals down for the previous month. On a normal month it looks like this:
October Average Words /300
October Draft Posts /120
October Published Posts /40
October Comments /40
Feedback
It is fairly easy to give feedback to students on their drafts and published posts in Write About. You can filter the writing by drafts or published posts or you can filter by the individual student. I try to go in a rotation and give every student comment or feedback before I start the list over. There is not, sadly, an easy way to see who you have given feedback too, but if you go in order, you can make sure everyone gets feedback.
You can also comment on published posts. When I taught full-year English classes, this is what I added in the second semester. This allowed students to read other people’s writing and have an authentic reader. Every Friday we publish a post and then comment on someone else’s with a substantial and useful comment. This took some pre-teaching, so students could make comments on other people’s writing. After some practice with commenting, students had another layer of feedback on their daily writing.
Grammarly
At the start of each term, I instruct my students to install Grammarly on their Chrome browser. This allows them to run this impressive grammar and spell check right in their Write About posts. It will also track their errors and send them weekly emails with their stats and common errors. It has improved the quality of their daily writing significantly.
Paper Prewriting
One of my favorite ways to use Write About is for the prewriting or paragraphs. We are currently working on research papers and as their daily warm-up writing for several days; I had students write on different parts of their research paper topic. Not only were they able to count it as their daily writing, but they were also able to make a start on the draft of their paper. When it came time to start our draft, students could log in an go straight to their drafts in Write About and copy them directly into their draft.
Wordless Wednesday is a quick post with just a picture from my classroom, a short explanation, and a question for you, my readers.
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Using current events and short articles is a strong instructional strategy no matter the content area or grade level. There are also numerous sites for teachers to use, but sometimes they do not have what you are looking for. I am a huge fan of Common Lit, but they are still building up their library of articles, so on occassion, I have to come up with my own.
Normally students have a choice of three to five articles that I have selected based on our current content. Under no circumstances do I want to read ten summaries of the same article, so I have a specific set of directions that avoid summary.
Here is the anchor chart posted to help us all remember the format.
How do you use articles and current events in your classroom?
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I was recently looking back at my goals for the 2015-2016 school year, and one was to embrace some elementary teaching methods in my secondary classroom. One of the ways I did this was with anchor charts. I had a few in 2014 and even fewer the year before. Now my classroom walls are as useful to my students as the furniture and supply bins.
I have made, re-made, thrown out, moved and crafted many anchor charts over the years, but here I have seven of my favorites for you.
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Real Reading vs. Fake Reading
Some would argue that by high school, especially by 11th and 12 grade, students should not nee to be told what real reading is. However, I find that is not the case. I post this visual reminder and review it regularly; redirection is also as easy as pointing at the chart.
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Revision vs. Editing
This is my most often referenced anchor chart; it has a prominent place located at the top right of my front whiteboard. As part of our weekly journal writing, we spend one day revising our writing from the week. Just last week I asked students to explain the differences on their midterm exam.
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Daily Journal Expectations
I am not really sure why it took me so long to make this anchor chart because every year I get question after question about our daily writing. I am thinking about actually making this a little sticker and having them put it in their notebooks, so they have the directions right in front of them.
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Lay vs. Lie
To be totally honest, this anchor chart started out to be for my own benefit, but the students use it just as often as I do. I have debated recreating it to add: Lie- meaning to fib.
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Literature Discussion
I haven't held as many literature discussions this year as I had hoped, but here is to second semester being better than first semester. Having a visual for students when they are participating in graded discussion is helpful. In addition, my less outgoing students benefit from having sentence starters to help them form contributions to the discussion.
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Literature Annotation
Annotation of both fiction and nonfiction texts has been a movement of my buildings for the last year or so. There are lots of annotation charts out there, but I felt they weren't ever exactly what I wanted, so I created my own. We will keep practicing to get this where it needs to be.
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A Lot
The last one is probably the most simple. It is also a nod to my seventh-grade English teacher, Mrs. Lieblier, who passed away too young. She was the person who taught me that 'a lot' is two words; she had 'a' on one side of her board and 'lot' on the other. Simple but effective. Just the constant visual reminder and large space in between were enough to help me remember, so I use it myself now.
I would love to know what anchor charts you have in your classroom.
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